Wednesday, July 2, 2014

Wonhundred Word Wednesdays

Prompt: She had to find the necklace, before...

Marlene had to find the necklace before Emily got home. She shouldn’t have “borrowed” it. She always lost Emily’s stuff. Now Emily was on her way home, and Marlene knew she would notice the missing necklace.

Marlene checked in all the couch cushions. She checked behind the dressers. She even checked in the freezer.

There was only one other possible location—the linen closet. Please be here. Emily would be home any minute. Marlene opened the door and jumped as something heavy fell. A lifeless body sprawled on the floor, blonde hair matted with blood.

Emily.


Marlene couldn’t stop screaming.

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Wendy Knight, Author: www.wendyknightauthor.blogspot.com
Kelly Martin, Author: www.kellymartinbooks.blogspot.com
Alison Woods (Peering Into. . .): http://alisonmillerwoods.wordpress.com/
Jessica Winn, The Distracted Writer:http://thedistractedwriter.com/
Stephanie Worlton's Kreating Krazy blog: http://stephanieworlton.blogspot.com/
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7 comments:

Laura D. Bastian said...

That was totally not what I was expecting her to find. That would be a huge shock. Great job.

Miranda D Nelson said...

Yikes! That is not what I was expecting. Poor girl, that would be horribly traumatic. Great story though!

Canda said...

Well that was completely unexpected!

Jenna Eatough said...

Not what I was expecting. It was a great twist.

AM Woods: alisonmillerwoods.com said...

Oh no, oh no. Roommates? Sisters?? Now I'm all sucked into the story! loved the unexpected twist.

Jaclynweist said...

Yikes! That was creepy! And awesome. Great job. :)

Jessica Winn said...

Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh. Nice job with the surprise! I didn't see that coming! I wouldn't be able to stop screaming either!